ext_17455 ([identity profile] shadowturquoise.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silver_sun 2011-05-24 02:14 am (UTC)

I just read all 7 parts in one sitting and I really love this story. Your characterization is well done for everyone. Some people tend to go over-the-top with Owen but you made him rude but still believable. I love vulnerable!Jack. It fits him really well.

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