I really enjoyed reading this, and look forward to the next fic! :) I like having everyone back, and these two stories managed to bring them back plausibly.

Just a note, I think you left one of your beta's comments in this chapter. [Thank you for this. I hate what the Doctor did with Alonso. Oh look there’s Jack. He’s grieving and in such pain so I’ll gift him with a pretty boy. WTF????] :)