It was for Kink-las, and the characters were Nick Cutter and Captain Tom Ryan from Primeval. I've just realised that Captain Ryan is probably probably more like 39 than 40, but Cutter is mid 40's. (Based on the age of the actors)
The odd comments were the LAS feedback ones, rather than the ones in reply to the fic when I posted it out to the Primeval comms (It's hard to find a nicer set of fans than those at primeval denial, they all seem to get on so well, I can't remember ever seeing an argument over their and all seem to write birthday ficlets for each other and have daily chat threads).
The LAS comments were along the lines of 'eww wrinkly sex' (in a couple of variations) and 'They couldn't have a relationship that people know about because of 'Don't ask, dont' tell'' (Which considering the characters in question in a UK based show where we don't have that rule and neither of the character are American I don't get why they thought it would apply. Apart from that they are both part of an organisation which deals with dinosaurs coming through holes in time, not part of the regular army.)
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The story is here http://the-silver-sun.livejournal.com/133693.html#cutid1
The odd comments were the LAS feedback ones, rather than the ones in reply to the fic when I posted it out to the Primeval comms (It's hard to find a nicer set of fans than those at primeval denial, they all seem to get on so well, I can't remember ever seeing an argument over their and all seem to write birthday ficlets for each other and have daily chat threads).
The LAS comments were along the lines of 'eww wrinkly sex' (in a couple of variations) and 'They couldn't have a relationship that people know about because of 'Don't ask, dont' tell'' (Which considering the characters in question in a UK based show where we don't have that rule and neither of the character are American I don't get why they thought it would apply. Apart from that they are both part of an organisation which deals with dinosaurs coming through holes in time, not part of the regular army.)