ext_19173 ([identity profile] fairyd123.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silver_sun 2009-04-14 10:53 pm (UTC)

I liked that. You could use a beta though - it's a good story but there are quite a few small but distracting errors that a beta would have helped with.

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