I saw in the other part that somebody had corrected some spelling mistakes, and I just found a few in here, so I hope you don't mind me pointing them out, I only want to help to make the story perfect:
until it’s surface is a crazed mess --> its surface (it's is actually short for "it is")
but he knows that there’s no way can’t talk about it --> no way he can talk about it
Anyway they need him to lead them, to tell than what to do, --> to tell them what to do
I looked through your tags and clicked onto "The year that never was". I recently have seen those episodes and also was intrigued by the possibilities and untold stories. Don't know whether you watch Stargate, there also was an episode where Jack O'Neill was tortured to death repeatedly and brought back to life for an unknown time span. It made for some great fanfictions. I know this actually belongs into the other part, but can I please ask you where the reference for the two lost years comes from? This is the first time I hear about this.
Your Jack voice is so spot on and I think he has every right to be disappointed in the doctor. I love mostly the sentences about how he puts on his smiley face for his team and tries to act as if nothing happened. Only that we know it did. And you are right, you CAN see it in his eyes, which is amazing. I constantly forget that it is only an actor, I really see a man there that has lived for 150 years. That is great work by JB, if you ask me.
One consideration - I read somewhere that people think it is a continuity error that the doctor actually knows about Jack's immortality. So, if he did not know then in a way he did not abandon him at the planet, if he thought he really was dead. Didn't he leave before he revived?
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until it’s surface is a crazed mess --> its surface (it's is actually short for "it is")
but he knows that there’s no way can’t talk about it --> no way he can talk about it
Anyway they need him to lead them, to tell than what to do, --> to tell them what to do
I looked through your tags and clicked onto "The year that never was". I recently have seen those episodes and also was intrigued by the possibilities and untold stories. Don't know whether you watch Stargate, there also was an episode where Jack O'Neill was tortured to death repeatedly and brought back to life for an unknown time span. It made for some great fanfictions.
I know this actually belongs into the other part, but can I please ask you where the reference for the two lost years comes from? This is the first time I hear about this.
Your Jack voice is so spot on and I think he has every right to be disappointed in the doctor. I love mostly the sentences about how he puts on his smiley face for his team and tries to act as if nothing happened. Only that we know it did. And you are right, you CAN see it in his eyes, which is amazing. I constantly forget that it is only an actor, I really see a man there that has lived for 150 years. That is great work by JB, if you ask me.
One consideration - I read somewhere that people think it is a continuity error that the doctor actually knows about Jack's immortality. So, if he did not know then in a way he did not abandon him at the planet, if he thought he really was dead. Didn't he leave before he revived?