Punctuation question.
May. 19th, 2009 07:31 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
silver_sunWhich one is these is right? or if both them are correct which one do people think is easier to understand/looks better.
“Not exactly.” His voice is taut, pained. Closing his eyes he bites his lip for a moment before continuing. “I know you’re interested in what Torchwood does, Gwen’s told me as much.”
Or
“Not exactly.” His voice is taut, pained. Closing his eyes he bites his lip for a moment before continuing, “I know you’re interested in what Torchwood does, Gwen’s told me as much.”
It's the , or . after the continuing that I'm interested in.
“Not exactly.” His voice is taut, pained. Closing his eyes he bites his lip for a moment before continuing. “I know you’re interested in what Torchwood does, Gwen’s told me as much.”
Or
“Not exactly.” His voice is taut, pained. Closing his eyes he bites his lip for a moment before continuing, “I know you’re interested in what Torchwood does, Gwen’s told me as much.”
It's the , or . after the continuing that I'm interested in.